English and Literature MLA

Unequal Opportunity; Race And Education.

I am attaching the paper to which is needed to add another 7 full pages. I am attaching the comments about the paper to improve it and also here is a very useful article link https://www.nytimes.com/2016/06/12/magazine/choosing-a-school-for-my-daughter-in-a-segregated-city.html

– On one part of the paper; page number 5, where it says – but people prefer not to talk about racial segregation avoiding this topic (Strauss).  Please add also what you think about this, your personal opinion about it, to make this part more complete.