English and Literature MLA

Rhetorical Analysis of Nguyens Article.

Hello,

This is a link to Nguyens article,
https://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/ripping-children-from-parents-will-shatter-americas-soul/2018/05/18/21e824ce-59f1-11e8-8836-a4a123c359ab_story.html

I need your help editing and revising the rhetorical analysis essay you did for me last week, my professor gave some feedbacks for the essay, she highlighted and added her feedbacks in the essay.

I uploaded all the instructions and rhetorical analysis essay in the additional materials