I am applying for grad school for an MS in real estate development.
Outline of my personal statement is: Tell us about your academic and professional goals and why you would be a good fit for the school and what will you bring to the program. This should be about 750 words.

My plan is to start the statement with an anecdote from my life as a hook and a theme to my statement. Then talk about my background. And finish up with what I want to learn in the school, why the school is the best fit, and what I would bring to the program if accepted. And what my plans would be upon graduation.

I have attached some drafts that I wrote quickluto give you some thoughts to work off of.

Please let me know if you have any questions or would like to connect to hear more about my experiences so that you can write the best possible paper that is interesting, coherent and answers the questions needed.