so, i have already finished a paper, i need someone to fix the feedback my teacher gave me. give it to my tonight in 3 hours.

• 1, Be sure you’re connecting ideas back to your claim rather than just summarizing
• 2, Tell the 2 ways you’re reading the text (ex. dialogue, cinematography, lighting, costumes, interactions between characters, etc.)
• 3, The paper needs to be over the text as a whole and this paper focuses primarily on one scene