Remove these points I’d encourage you to take out details about career – salary, passion, anything about the individual career.  Salary and the requirements of the dental hygiene degree, even the description of the major, you can take those out.

I emphasized Argument in a similar way but now, I’d like you to think of this assignment as being important information delivered to someone who needs to know it, with argumentative elements.

Add these points:  focus more on how to help support patients. we don’t know is the advancements made, the various lengths dentists go to now to get patients in the chair. I’m seeing the fear that many people have about going to the dentist being focused on here.
Write an MLA-formatted report. No cover page, 3-4 pages of text, 1 Work Cited page with at least 4 sources (so 1 actual page but if you need 2 Works Cited pages, thats fine).