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hi I wrote this paper already and need some editing and extra stuff added. for example can you come up with a question that best suit the event I observe. ill attach the event I attended with videos. I feel like there repetitive stuff, take that off if necessary I want it to be coesive …

hi I wrote this paper already and need some editing and extra stuff added. for example can you come up with a question that best suit the event I observe. ill attach the event I attended with videos. I feel like there repetitive stuff, take that off if necessary I want it to be coesive …

hi I wrote this paper already and need some editing and extra stuff added. for example can you come up with a question that best suit the event I observe. ill attach the event I attended with videos. I feel like there repetitive stuff, take that off if necessary I want it to be coesive …

hi I wrote this paper already and need some editing and extra stuff added. for example can you come up with a question that best suit the event I observe. ill attach the event I attended with videos. I feel like there repetitive stuff, take that off if necessary I want it to be coesive …

hi I wrote this paper already and need some editing and extra stuff added. for example can you come up with a question that best suit the event I observe. ill attach the event I attended with videos. I feel like there repetitive stuff, take that off if necessary I want it to be coesive …

hi I wrote this paper already and need some editing and extra stuff added. for example can you come up with a question that best suit the event I observe. ill attach the event I attended with videos. I feel like there repetitive stuff, take that off if necessary I want it to be coesive …