-what effect do you think that parallel structure has? Does it make sentences easier to understand? Does it make the sentences sound more rhythmic? Or would you argue that parallel structure is not that important? Answer in a paragraph, and quote sentences that do or do not use parallel structure in your response.(use the uploaded additional material title useful information to help)

-Try to identify the use of at least two coherence tools. Mention any ideas you have for improved coherence in the uploaded additional material titled coherence in this writing.