Use Australian legal guide citation. it is online.
Watch the video about child soldier in South Sudan. It is in the attached PowerPoint.
Elaborate on the issue/issues a little bit.
Structured the reflection well.
adjust the references with credible sources
You must include a source from Human Rights Watch in the Context of South Sudan
It should be 1300-1500 word. I strongly recommend 13500 or 1400 words.