Please edit my statement of purpose.  Please edit/adjust and strengthen content, and help me improve grammar, structure, articulation of key points, etc.

Here were the instructions:

Please answer the following question in not more than two pages, using a typed, double-spaced format.

Describe your three most important accomplishments to date that exemplify a Best for the World Leader. You may address civic service, community service, and volunteer work, if applicable, as well as work-related and entrepreneurial endeavors.

Here is a link on what “Best for the World Leader” means:  https://bschool.pepperdine.edu/about/best-for-the-world-leaders