i need an interesting hook as its own separate introduction paragraph. then i would need a body paragraph that clearly states the arguement and why it is very important. the arguement is whethor or not the students of my school (brookfield highschool) shoudl be allowed to leave the cafeteria during their lunch class and be able to walk or sit around in teh quiet school hallways. the stance i chose for the arguement is that the students should be able to do this without any consequences because it gives the students the opportunity to find a quiet place to sit or to hangout in rather than in teh noisey cafeteria. i have attached the research chart tht my teacher had given me  to complete that has some of the information about the topic and some peices of evidence. i have also attached teh rubric that was given to me by me teacher.