hi I wrote this paper already and need some editing and extra stuff added. for example can you come up with a question that best suit the event I observe. ill attach the event I attended with videos. I feel like there repetitive stuff, take that off if necessary I want it to be coesive and take away the subheadings also. I doesn’t have to be 5 pages. it should be from 3-5.

event: https://youtu.be/sYyXeDTs6uE
couldn’t find the video of this year but it the same exact format.