Cremewriter/bro/homie/writing bud:

these are my teachers’ notes on the case story:

-This seems to be very short and does not really go into depth on most anything.

-I  cannot tell if you used one of the models.  I have read it several times.  Am I missing it?

-You write, for example, “Although rule-based thinking is less applicable, Kant’s philosophy of a universal lawsuit..”  You need to tell me who he is.  Remember, you have the information on our Blackboard and you can use outside research.

-Where is the discussion on David’s professional agency/organization and any possible code(s)?

-In general, be more in-depth with all your paradigms, resolution principles, philosophers, etc.

-This assignment is to show you can put everything together, using all our resources and outside research to fully support your thoughts.

I received a 175/250 which is not fair!!! this was amazing!